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 \f0\fs26 \cf0 This scene is told in third person from the viewpoint of Emma Hayes.\
 As soon as her mother and sister drove off, Emma was on the phone, sitting on the bed in her parents\'92 bedroom, as the phone was on the nightstand and she could sit comfortably against the headboard of the bed with a pillow. In her lap was a notepad, and she planned to quiz all of her friends about what boys she should invite to her birthday party. It wouldn\'92t do to invite a boy her friends didn\'92t like, that would not do at all.\
 First up was her friend Susanna. She was a cheerleader and had an encyclopedia knowledge of all of the boys, good and bad. If she didn\'92t like a boy, the boy would not get on her list, even if Emma liked the guy. By the time they\'92d hung up the phone, she had seven boys on her list. She was shockingly, almost halfway done with one call. Next up, her best friend Mai Lin. She was Chinese, a major league cutie, and she and Mai Lin were constantly up for the yearbook \'93best looking\'94 in the class. Mai Lin was also extremely picky and the call ended with two boys scratched off and only one added. The third call was with Hannah, who Emma didn\'92t much like, but she had to be invited, as she came from a wealthy family and was popular with the boys. Two boys added. On and on the calls went, and finally, she had fifteen boys on the list, all vetted by her friends. And that\'92s when she realized she\'92d have to dump three of them for her boy cousins. She screamed in frustration, preparing herself to argue with her mother than her cousins didn\'92t count in the total.\
-Expand to a maximum of 1500 words. Emphasize snarky dialog with her friends.}
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