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+\f0\fs24 From Elikapeka's viewpoint at her kitchen counter, the party achieves critical mass as the Hayes cousins (Devin, 16; Tyler, 15; Marcus, 14), Bobby Carpenter, Emma's best friend Mai Lin, and a stream of girls arrive in quick succession, the men remain on Jim's sailboat with cold beers and a working sound system, Susan Carpenter manages the catered tables outside, Michelle Hayes moves through the kitchen with established familiarity, and Elikapeka ends the scene in a state of controlled acceptance\u8212?folding discarded tee shirts, drinking cold coffee, and privately claiming the cheerful chaos as her own\u8212?with thirty-six children now mostly arrived but the full arc of the evening still unresolved.
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