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+\f0\fs24 At Emma's backyard party, Lizzie\u8212?a reluctant attendee who would have preferred solitude and a Le Guin novel\u8212?is steered by Hannah into an unplanned introduction to Will Fontaine, Bobby's blond, blue-eyed friend, and experiences her first visceral, disorienting attraction; the encounter immediately transforms when shared Tolkien obsession produces genuine intellectual rapport, leaving the two of them sitting together on the pool coping deep in a debate about Tom Bombadil and the nature of desire while the party swirls around them, their connection established but its implications entirely unresolved.
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