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-<p class="itemText">The breakfast dishes were still on the table when Elikapeka Hayes poured herself a second cup of coffee and settled into the chair at the head of the table. Through the sliding glass doors she could see the backyard, the pool catching the late May morning light, the canal beyond it glittering, and the tall white mast of Frank Bellardi's sailboat swaying gently at the dock. Andy and her mother had been gone just over an hour. She had the morning ahead of her, quiet except for her daughters.</span></p></p>
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-<p class="itemText"><p class="p1"><span class="s1">Emma...</p>
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+<p class="itemText">The patio behind the restaurant was in shade for another twenty minutes, maybe thirty, before the sun would clear the line of palms along the cart path and make sitting outside genuinely unpleasant. For now it was tolerable. A ceiling fan turned overhead without much conviction, and a mockingbird somewhere in the palms was cycling through its repertoire with the manic energy of something that had nowhere to be.</span></p></p>
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+<p class="itemText"><p class="p1"><span class="s1">Ella had a Sprite and a sleeve of Oreos she'd bought from the vending machine inside...</p>
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