Add continuity dashboard and scene authoring workflow

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 \f0\fs24 Complete book lexicon\par
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-One term per line: term \u8212?usage note. Keep the complete book-level register here. The author selects a rolling subset for each package.\par
+Continuity update from Scene 1:\par
+Pompano Beach Golf Club \u8212? the public golf course where the Hayes family plays regularly, approximately a twenty-minute drive from the Hayes home.\par
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+Kowalski, Jim \u8212? rents the dock on the canal behind the Hayes house; owns a large white fifty-foot sailboat kept at that dock.\par
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+Continuity update from Scene 2:\par
+Pines course \u8212? the course at Pompano Beach Golf Club that is Andy Hayes's favorite layout. He knows every hole intimately. Opening hole (hole 1) is a 412-yard par four with a slight dogleg right; the fairway narrows toward the corner. Played from the back (black) tees it is a genuine driving test; the white tees present a shorter, more forgiving version of the same hole. The first green is gently undulating, sloped back-left to front-right with a couple of benign tiers.\par
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+Continuity update from Scene 3:\par
+Hayes cousins \u8212? Andy Hayes has a large extended family (two brothers and a sister nearby); their children are Emma's cousins on the Hayes side. Emma regards some of them as socially awkward at parties. Elikapeka insists all cousins be invited to family events without exception.\par
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 Continuity update from Scene 4:\par
-Mrs. Patterson \u8212? Lizzie's English teacher; assessed Lizzie as reading at a college level.\par
-Lighthouse Point \u8212? the Hayes family's town; the story is set here.\par
+Lighthouse Point library \u8212? small public library, the one Lizzie and Elikapeka visit regularly. Smells, to Lizzie, like the best possible version of being indoors. Located in Lighthouse Point, distinct from the Hayes home area but a routine destination for Lizzie and her mother.\par
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+Dragonriders of Pern series (McCaffrey, Anne) \u8212? Dragonflight, Dragonquest, The White Dragon. Lizzie's most-reread books; she has read each approximately seven times. The library's copies are older editions with different covers from her own.\par
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+Stardust (Gaiman, Neil) \u8212? novel with a pale, old-fashioned painted cover depicting a young man and woman against a dreamlike sky. Encountered by Lizzie at the Lighthouse Point library. Elikapeka judged it not yet appropriate for Lizzie at fourteen; indicated it might be suitable in approximately a year.\par
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+Continuity update from Scene 5:\par
+Palms course \u8212? a second course layout at Pompano Beach Golf Club, distinct from the Pines course. Ella and Bobby play it as their afternoon round on the same day they walk the Pines course in the morning. Cart use is standard for afternoon play in high heat.\par
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+Anhinga \u8212? large, common South Florida waterbird found around water hazards at Pompano Beach Golf Club. Bobby Carpenter claimed not to have seen one before, despite growing up in Pompano Beach; Ella regarded this as implausible.\par
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 Continuity update from Scene 6:\par
-Susanna Greer \u8212? head cheerleader at Emma and Mai Lin's school; treated as the authoritative arbiter of which boys are socially viable.\par
-Jake Ferreira \u8212? boy approved for Emma's party list; Susanna's first and obvious nomination.\par
-Chris DeLuca \u8212? boy struck from Emma's party list after it emerged he told Hannah Prescott that Emma and Mai Lin were interchangeable.\par
-Brandon Hicks \u8212? boy approved for Emma's party list.\par
-Tyler Kim \u8212? boy excluded from Emma's party list; Mai Lin reported he stared at her strangely in third period.\par
-Nate Oliveira \u8212? boy added to Emma's party list on Mai Lin's nomination; was kind to Mai Lin at a track meet.\par
-Hannah Prescott \u8212? popular with boys, comes from money; Emma uses her as a social resource while harboring no illusions about her motives. Nominated Marcus Webb and Corey Janssen for the party list.\par
-Marcus Webb \u8212? boy added to Emma's party list via Hannah.\par
-Corey Janssen \u8212? boy added to Emma's party list via Hannah.\par
-Ryan (swim team) \u8212? potential party invitee; recently broke up with his girlfriend per Hannah; status marked for confirmation by Emma.\par
-Devin \u8212? one of Emma's three boy cousins; considered tolerable by Emma.\par
-Tyler (cousin) \u8212? one of Emma's three boy cousins; Lizzie has claimed some acquaintance with him, which Emma finds both amusing and faintly annoying.\par
-Marcus (cousin) \u8212? youngest of Emma's three boy cousins, age fourteen; notorious for performing cannonballs next to people floating quietly in the pool; Emma does not want him at her party.\par
+Hayes cousins (boys) \u8212? three boy cousins on the Hayes side who are close to Emma's age; Emma expects them to stand at the edges of the yard at parties.\par
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 Continuity update from Scene 7:\par
-Palms course \u8212? the golf course where Saturday morning rounds are played; the eighteenth hole is considered particularly punishing.\par
+Eighteenth hole, Pines course \u8212? finishing hole at Pompano Beach Golf Club's Pines course. The green is elevated slightly above the fairway. A bunker sits on the right side with a steep face and soft sand capable of producing plugged lies. A water hazard runs alongside the green.\par
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+Federal Highway \u8212? road Andy Hayes drives north on when returning home from Pompano Beach Golf Club.\par
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+Continuity update from Scene 8:\par
+Hayes cousins (boys, named) \u8212? Travis, Corey, and Derek.\par
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 Continuity update from Scene 9:\par
-Jim \u8212? adult friend of Andy Hayes and Alex Carpenter; owns a sailboat docked at the canal behind the Hayes house; was present on the dock during Emma's party.\par
+Tom Bombadil \u8212? ancient, enigmatic character in Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings; his absence from the Council of Elrond and his relationship to the Ring were the subject of Lizzie and Will Fontaine's first conversation at Emma's party.\par
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+Old Man Willow \u8212? malevolent tree in Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings; referenced by Will Fontaine in the Bombadil discussion.\par
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+Continuity update from Scene 10:\par
+Hayes birthday cake \u8212? two-tier chocolate cake with pink and white real buttercream frosting and a hidden raspberry filling, made for Emma's sixteenth birthday party. Prepared by or at the direction of Elikapeka Hayes without telling Emma about the raspberry layer.\par
 
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