Nibmeister/authoring-system
0
0
Fork 0
Code Issues Pull Requests Actions Packages Projects Releases Wiki Activity

Add draft archive and acceptance workflow

Browse Source
This commit is contained in:
Joey Grasty
2026-08-23 15:47:46 -05:00
parent 23e4ef595e
commit 630c0c468f
18 changed files with 1701 additions and 67 deletions
Download Patch File Download Diff File Expand all files Collapse all files

4
hapagirlsauthoringsystemv1.scriv/Files/Data/1F883D3F-67E3-4124-925D-B010FE4743F6/content.rtf
View File

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
{\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252\cocoartf2868
{\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252\cocoartf2870
\cocoatextscaling0\cocoaplatform0{\fonttbl\f0\froman\fcharset0 Palatino-Roman;}
{\colortbl;\red255\green255\blue255;}
{\*\expandedcolortbl;;}
@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@
\f0\fs26 \cf0 The first scene of the book is told in third person from the viewpoint of Ella Hayes. It is the first weekend after the end of Ella\'92s junior year in high school. She\'92s a skilled golfer and has been taught to play from a very young age by her father. It\'92s Saturday, and like most Saturdays, she\'92s planning to play 36 holes of golf with her father. On this Saturday, they will be joined by a father who teaches his son in the same way that Andy teaches Ella. Ella and the boy, Bobby, are on their high school golf team, both are the best golfers on the team. There is no romantic interest between Ella and the boy; they are friends but their relationship is mostly just a shared interest in golf.\
It\'92s early on Saturday morning, more than an hour before their tee time, and Ella is anxious to get to the course. They have the first tee time at 7:24AM, as both Ella and her friend Bobby like to play fast, and the best way to play fast is to be first on the course, dew sweepers, they are often called. Her father is dawdling over a second cup of coffee. Ella likes a long warmup, whereas her father usually hits a few wedges and a few drives and is good to go. There is always tension between her and her father to get him going.\
The other daughters aren\'92t even up yet and Ella has finished her breakfast that her mother prepared and is ready to go. She dearly loves her father but wants him to get off his butt and go to the course RIGHT NOW!\
Create the first scene of the book, not to exceed 1500 words.}
At last they leave the house, their clubs in the back of Andy\'92s old pickup truck. They arrive at Pompano Beach Golf club and she finds her friend Bobby already having paid and waiting for her inside. She pays for herself and her father with his credit card. They exchange some snarky comments and then proceed to the range to warm up.}