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\f0\fs24 Scene: Scene 1\par
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Model: anthropic/claude-sonnet-4.6\par
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Character UUIDs: 46F0331E-D357-4989-8FC2-3D7D62BCA2D7,F90ECDD8-FBB2-44D5-96A5-EC16818FF442,497498CD-85FE-48E9-B852-18E043365DB6\par
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Accepted for editing: 2026-08-24T19:32:35-05:00\par
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### STYLE\par
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The style of the novel is in the style but not substance of Ken Follett. Each scene is in third person from the perspective of one of the characters.\par
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\par
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### LEXICON\par
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(none)\par
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\par
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### STORY\par
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(none - new storyline)\par
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\par
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### CHARACTERS\par
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Andy Hayes\par
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Father and husband. Works as an aviation maintenance technician at American Airlines out of the Fort Lauderdale Airport. Is a union member with nearly 30 years of experience. Scratch golfer. Large extended family, two brothers and a sister live nearby. Tall and handsome.\par
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Elikapeka Hayes\par
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Wife of Andy Hayes, of Hawaiian origin. Stay at home mom. (eh-lee-la-PEH-ka)\par
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Ella Hayes\par
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Oldest daughter. To be a high school senior. Highly skilled golfer looking for a college golf scholarship. Tall, haughty, proud, smart. Prefers male friends to female friends. Has never dated and rarely attends parties or after school activities other than golf. Taught golf primarily by her father, a scratch golfer. Daddy\u8217?s girl. Usually impatient with others and likes to play fast.\par
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### RECALL\par
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(none)\par
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### PREVIOUS\par
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(none)\par
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### NOTES\par
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Hayes house \u8212? The Hayes family lives in a two story house built in the 1960s on a deep water canal (meaning, the canal can be used for boats going out to the Atlantic ocean). The house has a boat dock, rented out to a friend who has a fifty foot sailboat. The house has a small pool in the backyard which is often used by the family for gatherings.\par
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Late May, 2000. Before dawn.\par
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### BRIEF\par
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The first scene of the book is told in third person from the viewpoint of Ella Hayes. It is the first weekend after the end of Ella\u8217?s junior year in high school. She\u8217?s a skilled golfer and has been taught to play from age six by her father. It\u8217?s Saturday, and like most Saturdays, she\u8217?s planning to play 36 holes of golf with her father. On this Saturday, they will be joined by a father who teaches his son in the same way that Andy teaches Ella. Ella and the boy, Bobby, are on their high school golf team, both are the best golfers on the team. There is no romantic interest between Ella and the boy; they are friends but their relationship is mostly just a shared interest in golf.\par
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It\u8217?s early on Saturday morning, more than an hour before their tee time, and Ella is anxious to get to the course. They have the first tee time at 7:24AM, as both Ella and her friend Bobby like to play fast, and the best way to play fast is to be first on the course, dew sweepers, they are often called. Her father is dawdling over a second cup of coffee. Ella likes a long warmup, whereas her father usually hits a few wedges and a few drives and is good to go. There is always tension between her and her father to get him going.\par
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The other daughters aren\u8217?t even up yet and Ella has finished her breakfast that her mother prepared and is ready to go. She dearly loves her father but wants him to get off his butt and go to the course RIGHT NOW!\par
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### DIRECTIVE\par
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Create the first scene of the book, maximum 1500 words.\par
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### SCENE\par
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